Tis is a jolly, easy going story written by a friend Subbu. This is his first attempt. He wanted me to post it here in ma blog and so here is the 1st part of his story. Read it. Enjoy it. Do let us know your comments... And later the 2nd part will follow...:)
Hi Friends…
Yaar yaaro peana pudichi kadhai ezhudhum bodhellam… idha konjam innum better a panirukalamnu yoschirukrom… Sari namable try panni dan paapome nu chumma karpanai siragellam paraka vidama… namba daily paathutruka… namba lifela nadakra, nadandha vishayangala konjam jollya sonna epdi irukum nu, timepasskaga ezhuda pattadhu dan indha story. Indha kaalathula love story dan ellarukum pudikudunu pasanga sonnainga… so adukaga engaluku sambandhame illadha andha loveum indha storyla kandippa varum… orae stretchla fulla storya sollama, 4 parta solli ovvaru part kum, one week gap vittu makkala guess panna vaikalame nu oru different muyarchiya indha storya 4 part a anuppurom… Innum konjam bettera irundhurukalame nu nenachinga na sorry boss… appo neengale try pannikonga… Ivan ivlo ezhudunadhe periya vishayam dan nu nenachinga na Thanks boss… I love you…
Note: Kadhayil varum nigalvagulum, kalayaalgalum yaarayum kaaya paduthum noakathil ezhuda padavillai… adhayum meeri ungal manadhai kaaya paduthinalo, ungaluku kobam undanalo…. Kovchiko kovchiko… Naanga onnum panna mudiyadhu…
Ivan… Subbu
(Naai sekar, Snake babu, Bottle mani madri naangalum neraya punai pear try pannom… but edhuvum suit aagadhadala simply Subbu… )
Part – 1 Good Luck:
Aval:
Rambai Oorvasi menagai... Ivargalai naam kandadillai... Perazhagu ena ketirukirom... Avargalin kalavayil oru pen undendral kandippaga aval ivalga than iruka vendum. Koondhalil thaazhamboo vaasam... Nadayil naatiya nalinam... katti izhukum karu vizhigal... mul neekiya rojakalin menmayana degam... Pengal kooda ivalai maru murai thirumbi Paarka aasaipadum vaseegara thotram...
Ippadi mel kurippita edhuvume illatiyum... Puccavana figure nu solla mudiyatiyum paakra madri oru figure daanga namba kadhaiyoda heroine.
Peyar: Aaradhana
Vayasu: Ella ponnungala pola ivalum sweet 16 nu dan solluva... but adhu poi... out of college... Fresher...
Unavu: Very good cook... ella different varieties um try panni nalla saapduva...
Religion: Converted Christian
Velai: Ctrl C Ctrl V.... Ada Adhanga... Software engineer... Periya company...
Avalukuriya Avan???:
4 ponnungala atleast oru ponnavadhu thirumbi paakra madri sumarana oru azhagu.
Ajithkumar colorla illatiyum, andha colorku varadhuku fair n lovely, Garnier lite (daily 2 vaati) ellam confidenta podra oru thudippu. Saturday sunday na ivan companyku mattum leave illanga... ivanoda toothbrush,Paste,Soap ellathukume leave dan...
Dhora kaalaila oppice pogum bodhu nalla decenta tuckin ellam panni style a povar... But anga poi apdi endha bencha theaipparunu therila return varum bodhu kaadhal barath rangeku azhuka varuvaru...
Maele kurippita anaithilum oru sadhavidha poiyum illai... Ellam kadaindhedutha unmai... Oho nu illatiyum oralavuku irukura ivarudanga namba hero...
Peyar: Dwaragai rajan.
Vayasu: 4 kazhudha vayasachunu appa eppovum thittuvar
Unavu: Edu kidaithalum, yaar vaangi koduthalum...
Religion: Diwaliku hindu, Ramzanku muslim, Christmas ku christian...
Because annaiku dana briyani poduvanga...
Velai: Ammani velai paakra adhe Software companyil Prestigious bench Professional.
Idho ippadi than aarambikiradhu ivargaludhu kaadhal kaaviyam…
Thingatkizhamaigal yaaruku than pidikum???... Palli sellum vayadilirundhe naam verutha appadi oru thingat kizhamayil...
"vaaram muzhuvadum velli kizhamai varaadha" ena ella software engineer pola naanum kanavu kandu konde office bus ilirundhu iranginaen. Swipe in seidhu vitu... velai seivadai pola nadithu kondirundha silaruku Goodmorning solli vitu… en benchil sorry en seat il vandhu amarndhaen...
Vazakamana forward mailgalai padithu, forward seidhu kondirukayil… dideerena edho saami padam poatu... indha mailai udane fwd seidhal 1 hour il ungaluku gudluck varum endroru mail en inboxai reach aanadhu... Eppozhudhum shift deleteku mattume sondhamana andha mail, andru mattum en paarvayai vittu vilaga maruthadhu. Satrum yosikamal udane 15 beruku fwd seidhu vitu
"vaada maapla dum adika povom" ena Mathiku ping pannivitu smoking zoneai noaki nadandhaen...
Sofa aruge irundha Hindu, TOI, DC, IE ena anaithayum padithu vittu, chi padam paarthu vittu, Cigerattin cousin sister coffe ai eduthu kondu… appadiye edhiril varum chudidhar,Short tops, saree ena paara patcham indri paarvayai meya vitu vandhukondirukayil
"Paara maapla andha sottayana, indha vayasula papera padichi andha monna naai enna collector aagava pogudhu" endran prakash.
Vidra mapla avar paiyan yaarachum inga vela paapaana irukum endraen.
"Dey namba office taga maatirukuda naai" endran
Appo naan vena poi koundamani stylea… unaku ingayachum ingayachum moola iruka nu sotta mandaila thattitu varava ena sirithu konde cigeratai patha vaithom...
Kaigal pala maarinalum dum kick kurayamal sharingil poi kondirukayil...” Adradra naaku mooka naaku mooka naaku mooka” ena en mobile alari anaivarukum erichalai koduthadu..
"Rajan"
"Yes speaking"
"Partha here"
Soldra maapla... Epdi iruka... dey namba paartha da ena mathiyidam solli mudikum mun...
"Hello you are speaking with a Project manager regarding your next project assignment" ena edhirmunayil avaradu kural konjam ganam aanadhu...
"adhu sonna dana theriyum... munnuke solla vendiya dana" ena prakash madurai slang il vazhakam pol kalaaika...
Plz plz plz da… ena muga paavanayaleye sivaji ganesan alavuku avanuku nadithu kaati puriya vaithu vittu
"Sorry i mistook as my friend" ena naan solla
Kaanda mirugam pesi andru dan kaeten…
"Stop playing and come to B2 3rd floor Right wing conference room in 10 mts" ena padaar ena cut seiya pattadhu…
Oh idhu dana andha 1 hr la gud luck… ena andha mailai anuppiya sangeetha saniyanai thitti konde nadakayil... en ul manadhu mattum solli kondadhu… wait pannu innum 30 mts iruku kandippa gud luck varum endru…
Ippadi veyil adithal andha aravindsaami kuda karuthu viduvan, ena sooriyanai vaindhu vitu viraindhaen B2 virku... Namba nerathuku dan lift 3rd flooril irundhu Padi padiyaga irangi ground floor vandhadaindhadhu... Lift Ulle nulaindhu… 3 press seidhu.. oaramai nindru kondu ennai naane kaetu kondaen...
“Enna projecta irukum... Oru vela neathu sun newsla kalaingar sonnare… koodalurla edho analmin nilayam project nu adhuva irukumo... cha cha adhu irukadhu… adhu electrical project... Oh appo mainframes projecta... JCL abbreviation ellam keppaingalo... ayyayo marandhu pochae... JCL na... Jcl na Jayalalitha congress Leadera... satyama maatnada nee ena thiru thirunu mulikayil…
ton ton 3rd floor ena door open aaga sema sema sema figure ondru entry koduthadhu... Bye darling ena ullukul avaluku tata solli kondu exit koduthaen… veliye vandhadhum edho moolayil strike aagi JCL na Job control language ena enakul kathi kondaen... got it man.. got it...
Rajesh bushan ellam training il maanji maanji sonna podhum compre fail aagi recompreku vizhundhu vizhundhu paditha podhum marandha JCL in full form oru kerala figureai paarthadhum arai nodiyil vandhuvitadhe... Omana kutti chellam vaazhga nee... sureshot pass da machan ena thirandhaen kadavai...
Tensionai kuraika thirandhaen restroomin kadavai... Relax seidhu kondirukayil "Looking at beautiful gals really relieves tension" ena enakul naane oru onliner ai create seidhu vitu… kannadiyil mugathai paarthal… kaalayil poata fair n lovely black n ugly aaga maari irundhadhu... Thoongi ezhundhu ennai vadindha mugam... Kai kazhuva vaithirundha soap solutionai, instant fair n lovely ai ninaithu mugathai kazhuvi... tissue paper kizhiyum alavuku thudaithu vitu… maniyai paarthal innum 20 mts iruku gudluk mudiya ena manam meendum rerecording seidhadhu...
Angala parameswari thaaye ena ulle uraka kathi kondu "Excuse me" endraen conference room kadhavai thirandhu kondu...
Paartha.... Paarth saarthi... Engeyo paartha madri iruke ena ninaikayil… avanadhu sottai mandayil 1000 watts bulb ondru flash aanadhu... Aaha indha monna naai dan collector aagradhuku paaper padichitrundhuda... namba kalaichadhu ivanuku ketrukomo ena oru doubtoda
"Rajan... Dwaragain rajan "endraen...
“Oh... Come in... pull out a chair man” endrar...
Pakkathil irundha gaali cubicle il irundhu… vasool raaja mbbs-il kamal, anand sir ai thalluvadai pol oru chair-ai thallikonde "Dont worry sir ungaluku periya aapu ulla iruku" ena chairidam sollikonde… iru pengaluku mathiyil irundha gaaliyana idathil poatu amarndhaen... Iru pakkamum thirumbi asattu sirippudan hi endraen...
Ponnu na veliya paatha kerala figure madri irukanum... idungalum irukudhe... Onnu panniku paint adicha madri... Innonnu iruka illaya nu light adichi dan paakanum... Yeanda aandava en teamla mattum ipdi sotha pigurungala podra ena… amarndhirundha 12 berayum oru noatam vitaen... 8 gals 4 boys... calculation ellam correcta dan iruku... but selection dan poor Mr.god... onnu peravala... unna naan mindla vachikran, ena avalai mattum oru 2nd look vitu vitu nere nimirndhal, engal team ai katti meikum thalaivanin andha kaanda miruga kural meendum arangai adhira cheidhadhu...
"Well we have another one to join... Lets wait for another 10 mts. In the mean time prepare urself 4 a brief intro about you" endrar...
Oh idhula paatulam vera paada solluvangalo ena enakul sirithu kondu… “Hi friends.this is raajan... Hi friends.this is raajan... Hi friends.this is raajan...” Ayyayo idhuku mela oru mannum vara maatikudhe... neathe sollirndhalachum pasangalta keatutu vandhurukalam... ipdi dideernu koathu vitutiye da gunda... Sari vidra maapla… ellarum solluvaingala, adha apdiye inga onnu, anga onna seathu sollikalam… ena manadhai theathi kondu… sumar figureai meendum oru look vitaen... Sincereai sms adithu kondirundhal.. indha kaalathla skoolaye pickup paniraingapa, vidu andha figure namakilla, ena sogamai left side thirumbinal… paint adicha panniyum msg type panni kondirundhal... Enna karumam pudicha taste da indha kaalathu pasangaluku, ivala kooda vitu vaikalaya ena nere paarthal meendum kaanda mirugam...
Dey zoo kulla iruka madriye irukuda... vittura naaye… naan ipdiye oadi poidran ena maniyai paarthal innum 10 mts iruku... gudluck aavadhu mannavadhu... naan paatuku sivane nu ukkandhutrundhan... enna kootiyandhu ipdi maati vitutengale… idhuku per dan unga oorla gudluck a da, ena kannai iruka moodi kondalum… edho ondru mattum innum solli konde irundhadhu 10 mts iruku kandippa gudluck adikum da machan nu...
"Excuse me" ena ninaithu ninaithu paarthaen shreya gosal Pondra melliyadoru kural...
Kangalai thirandhu paarpadarkul
Paari nisa sa… paari nisa sa… paari nisa sa paari gamapa… ena kalyan-in contact tone en mobileil adika adhai cut seiyum muyarchiyil avalai paarka marandhu vitaen...
Gudluck???
Part2 - Naalaimudhal KT- il thodarum...
13 comments:
Hi Subu......
Nice start.. Such a long story (part -1). But not getting bored... nice man...
ALL THE BEST..
Waiting for Part -2
When r u going to Post...........
Kirthi,
Hope u remember me. Me only posted comments for u @ chinmayi's blog.......
Nice to see ur blog... This is the first the i m visiting urs... Hope i ll be the regular visitor of ur blog..
See u...
@ Raji... thanx for visiting n commenting...yeah i do remembr u frm chinmayi's blog...2nd part wil b posted shortly...keep visiting..:)
halo boss unga storyy na 2part paduchuten really juperruu
ungalakuu nakkal kindal la semaya irukku storyy la
Girls comment panrenga la sema sema
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hey krith,
who is dat subbu di...
awesome openin and intro...
nice story...nice characters til nw..
wen i started 2 read it i myself started 2 imagine it as a film..
anyhw tel ur frend nt 2 tak much tym in givin d second part..
eagerly awaitin fr it..
ANAND...
Subbu, Neenga periya Koundamani fan nu theriyuthu...
I'll comment about the story after reading it completely (all parts).
i like being brutally honest.
Your style is good. For some reason, when I read the names Aaradhana & Dwaragai Rajan, I can't stop thinking about the Legendary author Late Sujatha. Names are typical Sujatha. But its good that you didnt totally venture into his style.
The "Paari nisa sa… paari nisa sa… paari nisa sa paari gamapa" was a typical tamil cinema heroin introduction scene.... Well, that can't be totally true.. because every guy would feel like that "pari nisa sa :)" only ..:) ;)
Only if you were in IT, you would know these details. At least I would like to think so.
And its good that you took some time out in your busy schedule (really ???!!) :) and
System.out.println () your thoughts...:)
when you get time, read http://www.maraththadi.com/
and one more thing.. Please see if you can post the content in Unicode Tamil.
you could try the Google transliteration link below..
http://www.google.com/transliterate/indic/Tamil
So, Krithi :- you are a publisher now :)
Cheers!
Madhu
Hey nalla comments vandurukula..!Ppl hav taken so much time to read it..!Hmmm...Gud...Post da 2nd part in comin week re.!N abt ma comments...i hav already commented a lot to the writer n i am his biggest fan as far as his stories are concerned..!Gr8 tal;ent subbu.Keep rockin.!Yo ll be a gud screenplay writer if yo enter into cine indus.!gud luck.!
@madhu...
thank u so much for takin time to read d story n comment here...yup am a publisher nw :D
keep visiting...d 2nd part wil b publishd soon
Thank you all for your comments.
Thanks Krithi for publishing... Sujatha sir nu illa, naan podhuva yaaroda story um padichadhilleenga... edho office la romba boring work kuduthangale nu timepass ku apdiye start pannan... podhuva engala suthi nadakra sambavangala apdiye bit bita saethu ezhudunadhu daan...
aaradhana thavira matha ellame real life characters dan... avangalum, loves um mattum karpanai kadha paathirangal...:)
Meendum oru murai nandri...
Simply Subbu...
oooh... subbu story eh/>?? Ahem... itz gud.. nice start!
My wishes 2 him!
keep rockin!
aprom krithi nee epo un LIFE storya publiish panna pora?!? :P
kalakungo!
aishu ma subbu ku wish panel sari...en mela yen ma inda kolai veri???!!?
kola veri laam... seri free.. naan un biography pathi ezhudhuren! akku vera aani vera pirichu meyaren! hehe... kiddin mach.. gud wrk.. u too keep rockin da..!
really cool story ........i am not used to read stories but this one is different.........but sry i didt read full story i will finish it soon........
Hi,
I happen to read three part of subbu's story. where will I get the final part.
Youthful and humourous writting :)
If possible give me his emp ID or mail ID.
Bala.
Mcity
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