It was a dark and cloudy night. A girl in her mid-twenties stood beside her work table looking out through the window. Her inner desire to catch a glimpse of the first raindrop that hits the ground, impeded her from pursuing her work. She loved the sound of the clattering raindrops and usually dreamt of dancing in the rain with her Prince charm someday. She considered it as a trait of femininity to love the rains. As the clouds poured down like millions of arrows thrusting at the earth surface, she gazed at the beautiful sight. A tear drop streaked her cheek as her thoughts zoomed around the lonely life she lead. Suddenly she heard a thundering noise from nowhere. It was a long, deep, hollow, haunting noise. The trees out there looked like some huge, ghostly figures in the dark to her. Maybe she was imagining too wildly she thought. She heard the noise again – the same weird noise. Maybe it came from the crematorium behind her house she thought. She crept slowly to her bedroom and looked through the window. She couldn’t make out anything in the dark. It was a cold night yet she was sweating and a chillness run down her spine. She hadn’t eaten anything since morning and was ferociously hungry. Yet she couldn’t bring herself to eat anything solid because of the creepiness inside her. She changed to her favorite grey nightgown and went to bed leaving the lights on. The creepy noise was haunting her mind that she lay wide awake in her comfy bed. At midnight the lights went off suddenly. Panic-stricken she tried looking for the candle and matches she usually left at the bedside table. She couldn’t find them. The place was filled with darkness. She heard the loud, haunting noise again. She let out a loud cry……A nightmarish scream….
At daybreak, a friend of hers from a nearby town tried telephoning her but the line was dead…..
I am no writer of any sort. Tis is the first time ever I've tried something like this. Well if u liked my work thanks a lot. Am sorry if u dint like it. Maybe at least u found it amusing:):)
Whomever you are, I'd really feel good if u would let me know ur comments!!:)
Signing off,
Krithi
28 comments:
hey ur passage s wonderfull re.. i never knew u had such great creativities !! awesome passage.. too moucha books n novels padikkara nu nenaikeren.. so ur thought hv flowed out 2 make ur own creation re.. nalla story writter ah varuva !!! he he h.. continue tis work.. kalakku..
Hey dat divya above me is ragu eh?how to change ma name:o??
Hey it ws lik readin a horror novel re..!Gud attempt..!Gud thriller kinda..!But yo could have dramatised more by addin sum suspicious elements to make it still more interesting..!Ur writin style ws lil similar to sidney..May be yo are a voracious reader f her works..! N "Wild in the nyt"Reminded me of da romantic novel that i read..Think yo too read it.We both went to da lib r'ber?T nagar.N i never returned it;)Gav it to yo i guess...Neve mind..!N once again Congrats 4 da Gud work..!Expectin a chill love story from yo next time;)
@ jenny tats r.divya i think..:)
@jenny i thot of dramatising more nly bt i was nt sure if it wud wrk out d first time itself...so thot i ll leav t short!!
thanx again...ya i named the title wantedly nly..to remind yo abt dat buk!!:)
so tat u'd hav romantic nyt 2day!!:);)
ok thn remove my prev comment...jenny per mattum vachuka...N "If you have anything against what am writing.......who cares! Its ma life...nd am living it!??"This sounds lil aggressive...Enna aachi unnaku??Anyway its ur life only ada yaaru illanu sonna.But yaravadu vandu pathadum indha ponnuku thimuru jasthi nu nenachikaporanga..Nenacha ennangura nu keta..Hmmmm onnum panna muduyadu..Thooninada sonnan..
Oh yaa..!Dat novel is one absolutely romantic one re..I ws livin in dat world wen i ws readin it..Do yo hav it??
yemma enna krithika.. 1st tym eh... unbelievable....... g8 n wonderful... ithula irruthu theriyuthu you hav used oly foreign authors books in ur UG courses.. lolz.. keep tryin yar.. al the best
@divya..
thanx re...yup am reading a lotta thrillers these days..too much f JONATHAN KELLERMAN...taz y!!:):)
Ya dat mus be r.divs only..Coz she has mentioned it as a passage:)Think she din get da gist f it..!
Hey paaru di unna thaslim asinga paduthitaa...Iduku dan GRE padicha mari english use panna kudadunguradhu;)
Hey tomo sourav b'day.Venumna put an article abt him..N inniki my Dhoni b'day;)
@no i gav t back actually!
wil try gettin t for u if he has t stil...i wil b goin thr 2mr i think
@jenny i knw it sounds aggressively...bt cudnt help t!! mayb am turning into one!!:):(
@thaslim...
thanx da...adiye foreign author book lam nan paathade ila..i read novels nt texts!! gt inspired by d books i read nly!:)
@jenny
nan enga di GRE padichen ne vera??
adan re en skool frnds elam stil thinkin am d sam eskool kid nu nan mariten sona yarum namba matranga!!
@jenny dhoni b'day therium! iniku meera n anand b'day too...hope u wishd them!!
sourav pathiya k wil try!!
hey nice one :)
u kept d interest gud !
and u hv so many comments !!
go on.. we are der to read !
krithi oru junior shyamalan ah uruvayitu varey nu nenaikuren...
dat was jus fantabulous for a start...
keep it goin gurl...
venum na sollu...
naan unnoda dreamz la vandhu night mares kudukuren...which will indeed inspire yu a lil more... ;) ;) wat say???
@ meera...yup thanx a lott!!:):)
@niru!! already i gt d weirdest dreams eva! actually tis itself s one f ma dreams nly!! idula ne vera variyaa ipove bayama iruku!!??!!:P
actually im than :)kandupidichathuuuu krithi talent eh
ipo 1st story mathri le pattaya kilapara
but en 4edge ku than ithu la puriya matenguthu :(
@selva...thanx da...un pecha ketu dan suma kanamuditu buildup pani ida ezhudinen!!:)
ama ena puriyala unaku...
hey krithi,wonderful try re... it was amazing.. i thought it was a real novel..a best try.. y dont u build it up stilll into a full novel...give a try na...apadiye sidney style...don mind me sayin this re,give a change in the story coz it is lil similar to tell me ur dreams...onlu lil not very much.. krithi carry on.. u ll hav excellent writin style n creative ideas... class la epo paru novel padichi padichi un brain ivalo develop agirichi... this proves u dint listen to any class re..:)
really proud of u re...
@dharsh
thanx a lot...even jenny said t seems to b sidney's style f writing...mayb i gt influenced by sidney's books coz i've read most f d books! bt d actual base f d story is my own dream...i juz exaggerated t! nd ya class la novel padichu padichu dan clas listen panradaye vitene pudusa theriada mari kekra??!!:);)
nee class listen pana matanu nanga romba naal namlala la... coz u take notes also n read novel also... ipo kolapam over.. u hav read only novels..:)
hey kriti.. really nice one..:) jus like a sidney or jeffery!!enjoyed reading it.. why dint u finish it fully.. could have written more na!eagerly awaiting more stories like these!:)
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